The overall feedback on the effectiveness of our message a style was positive.
With our poster we are going to play around more with the layout in order to make the negative space work more effectively. An option for fixing this is to have a cityscape in the background, which would then carry on across our other media forms. We are also going to change out the photographed windows, which are not working, for illustrated windows which will be more inviting and flow more from our style. We are also working on micro detailing such as kerning and will need to add in the current neighbours day logo.
With our flyer we mainly need to work on micro detailing such as fixing some awkward negative spaces. This could be achieved with the incorporation of the city scape that we are thinking of using in our poster.
With our website, we were given some really interesting suggestions about things we could to with the header and footer. These include incorporating the logo into the rule instead of having a speech bubble, and also transforming the footer rule into a city scape.
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